Our feedback on our first draft - things to improve on:
. Change our fonts and to different colours
. Speed up some parts of walking to the school because it can be boring without action sometimes
. change instead of our title all coming in at once to possibly split it up into two halves with possible sound effects to make it look interesting
. Correct the audio - make the voice over louder and the music quiter, so we can understand the audio better
. Cut down the time of the art competition in screen
Things that went well:
. Good cinematography
. Placements of fonts was good and neat
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